The poem is at the mercy of the hearer's mouth and what can rhyme or reason make of that.
Perhaps, out of that comes the salad. Tomatoes and potatoes are related by botany and song (as in the Great American Songbook). And here's a salad to go with --
avocado
sharp cheddar
cherry tomatoes
Persian cucumbers
cooked & cut red potatoes
carrots
radish
sliced honey tangerine
black olives or green or both
fresh cilantro
pepper
lemon
olive oil
5.
ReplyDeleteSuch is the cacaphony of desire
(or is it just the faraway gaze
of someone finding their purse)
ah, spring --how it resembles
its own dawning promise!