What is being confessed - grammar grievances? Seriously (though grammar be of weight & import), no matter how cloaked in the impersonal, can a poem be devoid of the poet's experience & feeling?
Robotic poetry? Artificial intelligent poetry? Science is being confessed.
From a meal can you derive a hint of the cook's joys. Of her sins. Sinful food; sinful poetry. The seesaw, stalled and, yet, the balance of the ripe weights impartially. & kindly
Brazen 8
ReplyDeletespring the way it's always been
crazy logic & pointy hats & sweater pins
all gates open on the muddy roads
all hearts open to the sea
on the scrunchy horizon
dreams and mountain air