Monday, November 19, 2012

Pomegranate. Are the seeds in a pomegranate akin to the punctuation in a poem?

In terms of numbers, unlikely. Unlikely there would be 613 marks of punctuation in a poem. Unless an epic. Unless a ballad. Unless one gigantic poem spilling an entire book of more than (say) 24 pages

and yet, I do think
a pomegranate
with seemingly
613 seeds, mostly
edible, mostly
there
does indeed
shepherd
breath
particular
as all fruit
does
to wings

1 comment:

  1. letting all brush with danger take its time
    they lingered in the ancient ruins

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