Falling Action. How can one recognize falling action in a minimal poem?
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Among beets there is a discernible falling (& rising) rhythm. Now, can you hear? The same can be said of cheese. However, it is more difficult to discern.
{falling} she was falling out
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their hot breath
and rising from the river bed
a visitation from the czar
they pick the rampant cloverbeds until
moonlight descends upon their sled
sinners want another ride
empty of all doubt