First, let's think of punctuation not in terms of speed but of bite.
Chives have a nice bite to them.
The mouth satisfies.
Colorr & spear-shape satisfy eyes..
Stimulates the pen. Thus, a poem
might...
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left there on the table, uncut.
She reached for the prize, hungry
for the juice, for its breeze inside.