Monday, April 5, 2010

Does editing a poem make words deciduous?

Fall away. In Spring blooms shed as is nature. The deciduous celebrates space. Is this akin to the minimal in poetry?



In a meal conversation is bud, bloom and story. A revealing of space. Of taste. Texture, too.
And the story, continually edited.

1 comment:

  1. Slatch




    As if terribly warm the beach still wants them

    bird

    or bells

    footsteps

    visible only to her

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