You're thinking of trees, right? I'm seeing felled camellias -- blooms on branches disembodied. Past prime. What is a felled poem? Perhaps a fragment? Sappho ascending and descending.
And of food? What wind and rainstorms do to fruit. Also birds. Also people. You and me.
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Friday, May 30, 2014
Knife
A friend admonishes -- no knives in the sink. Across the hide of a tomato, I assume is not suspect. What's slices (or dices) a poem? I suggest a one-word answer: breath.
Blueberries
What a season for blueberries! Basket after basket. Always a treat of color, and they fit so well in your palm, begging to be enjoyed. Just like petite purple potatoes -- but no quite.
So, what's the equivalent in poetry? Short, of course, and unexpected yet satisfying. Not haiku (they have a sense of salad and breeze and mountain about them). I think just a few words, perhaps a line only. A line full of color. Vibrant. Totally itself. Perhaps, a line curving.
So, what's the equivalent in poetry? Short, of course, and unexpected yet satisfying. Not haiku (they have a sense of salad and breeze and mountain about them). I think just a few words, perhaps a line only. A line full of color. Vibrant. Totally itself. Perhaps, a line curving.
Eraser
Keep food bright and uncluttered. Color, by the way, doesn't clutter. So bring on the hues. The same with poetry. How to accomplish the latter? Keep an eraser at hand. Actual and metaphorical, that is. The mouth and ears are wonderful erasers. So go ahead and read poems out loud; you'll feel how (or how not) they've been edited. Stir away.
Wednesday, May 21, 2014
Celebrate
No reason, no occassion necessary to celebrate good food (colorful and shapely) and vibrant words which make your mouth dance. Celebrate the simple -- daily. Celebrate with friends.
Paperweight
So curious this word -- paperweight. The weight of paper. The weight of word. The weight of the ripe. The weight of perfect color. The waiting for the ripe -- food and word.
Just now, what does the paperweight secure?
Just now, what does the paperweight secure?
Golf
Golf favors a small ball much like haiku favors few words.
And what food to pare with both?
Salmon and a colorful salad.
And what food to pare with both?
Salmon and a colorful salad.
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