Things that should be there can go missing in a poem. Equals confusion. Edits of prose structure can lead to the minimal style of poetry. Petite eloquence. Petite starkness. Echoes across ravine.
When food is truncated is that the equivalent to snacking? Or, trail mix?
Happy Trails
ReplyDeleteseeing once again the edges of the rock
and its interminable distance to the sea
we have held onto such a ballast
once in terror, once in joy
all hail the commander of celestial arches
spaces through the manor calling us forth